The vines drove up the house one day
and started climbing shingles
got in between the vinyl cuts
and had a happy wiggle.
He noticed them they waved "hello"
around the window screen
and penetrated readily
his home and long daydream.
The vines drove up the house one day
and started climbing shingles
got in between the vinyl cuts
and had a happy wiggle.
He noticed them they waved "hello"
around the window screen
and penetrated readily
his home and long daydream.
Days are long, disturbing
roads are wet they slip
red lights, cameras
slow him down
he clicks a music fix.
Tickets are expensive
the airport's far away
a passing sign is missing
red neon letter A.
While the engine rattles
fumes float up his way
he notices his sticker
expired yesterday.
Bless the ones who try each day
or sometimes for a lark
wind up put the bottle down
then smash it out the park.
Batting in the ninth position
tenth is on the bench, still
the ball comes in for him
and out there is the fence.
I forgot just what I felt
it went away one day
and perhaps for you as well
dont know
you didn't say.
There was a piece of paper
a new arrangement made
no more conversations
and a new place to stay.
Her beauty was quite soothing
and kindness lit her smile
patience was a landscape
grew our lives awhile.
And then the changing weather
nothing stays the same
forever a misguided word
map error exit lane.
there are no words you see
no going forward
backward
just be here quietly.
Breezes through the screen door
hz on tv
one of those god numbers
promise quick healing.
I tried to say you are the one
will hold me as I go
or I will watch you blast off
then backpack out alone.
Our neighbor's father passed away
it was his saving grace
hospice for a week or so
"Good-bye"
they needed space.
Bag of kittens
Stretch and Mittens
thanks for coming out
watching Pops
walk to the river
"David"
mom calls out
back inside the kitchen
Howdy Doody says
"spruce up little man"
"we be going places
Jason
argonauts advance!"
army of the puppet kids
drowning river rats
night descending
sheets upending
heart of darkness dance.
It all started long ago
big movie silver screen
Sound of Music
Julie Andrews
attractive lady sings.
High school and the townies
youngsters live downtown
always up for fighting
enjoy screwing around
poet with poor vision
wore coke bottle eyes
isn't playing football
Sound of Music guy.
I'm having trouble sleeping
although remember now
earlier a shade of green
was different somehow.
Like your eyes their lids half closed
the smile graceful and arched
like the sea green off the coast
when we were there in March.
In 85 I think it was or earlier this eve
I may have slipped awhile off then
and been beyond these sheets
mixed up with the blush of sky
your lips and subtle glow
I'm having trouble sleeping
but must have slept
you know?
They say till death but then again
there is no linen pall
just dreams go on from dawn
to dusk
then night no sleep at all.
Football is a game they say
put the ball in net
while half the world is in great pain
needs food, meds, shelter etc.
Our bb net much smaller
round and higher up
indoors so there's shelter
if nature interrupts.
I enjoy the people
go crazy at the games
their joy at moments
lights the room
in 8K color
great.
Then the manic turnaround
despair when losing games
like Egypt Argentina
it is kind of insane.
Imagine if the goalie
got it in his heart
to demonstrate priorities
made more sense
a start.
Like a monk in Vietnam
set himself on fire
to protest a crazy war
becomes a funeral pyre.
So the goalie has the ball
while someone runs his way
tosses ball to him sits down
no longer wants to play.
Doesn't set himself on fire
doesn't crash a plane
just sits down and meditates
the world is blown away.
Oh! A little fantasy
I'm heading back to bed
plan to watch the game
of course
own goal might work instead.
This morning
little trip downtown
flowers flashing by
Nonie does the driving
while I watch the sky
looking out for visitors
go faster than the eye.
Don't believe in ufo's
and then again I lie
clouds are acting funny
keep a close watch
sigh.
Way points new locations
onward to the doc
practice counting backward
from nine or ten
one hundred way too much.
Maybe a late luncheon
after the exam
put a fork in everything
Craters! Golf heaven!
Such great tunes and dancing
bands but where the
trees?
Are there bars on Mars?
Of course
they do bartering.
Relapsing boom de boom again
Martians having fun
call out "dance you five toed lot"
I need be home by ten.
Mars is really not much fun
earth is not much better
Venus! That's the ticket Spot
So hot! Forget the leather.
Stream of consciousness is one of the most fascinating intersections between modern psychology and literary art. It is both a technique for capturing the chaotic reality of human thought and a mirror that helps us understand our own minds and spirits.
Here is an exploration of where it came from and how it serves as a balm for the human psyche.
The Origins and History in Literature
Before it became a staple of 20th-century novels, "stream of consciousness" was actually a psychological term. It was coined by philosopher and psychologist William James (brother of novelist Henry James) in his 1890 masterpiece, The Principles of Psychology. He famously wrote:
"Consciousness, then, does not appear to it itself chopped up in bits... It is nothing jointed; it flows. A 'river' or a 'stream' are the metaphors by which it is most naturally described."
Literary artists realized that traditional, neat, chronological narratives didn't reflect how human beings actually experience reality. We don't think in perfect, grammatically correct sentences; our minds jump from a sensory memory (the smell of rain) to a deeply rooted anxiety, to a lyric of a song, all in a fraction of a second.
The Modernist Revolution
In the early 1900s, authors began breaking traditional rules of syntax and punctuation to capture this internal drift. Key pioneers include:
Dorothy Richardson: Often credited with being the first English writer to intentionally apply this method in her multi-volume novel Pilgrimage (1915).
Virginia Woolf: In masterpieces like Mrs. Dalloway and To the Lighthouse, Woolf used the technique to fluidly drift between the internal lives of different characters, capturing the profound beauty and loneliness of individual perception.
James Joyce: Took the technique to its absolute stylistic peak in Ulysses (1922). The final chapter—a massive, unpunctuated soliloquy by Molly Bloom—perfectly mimics the semi-lucid, drifting thoughts of someone falling asleep.
How it Helps the Human Mind and Spirit
While it can sometimes be challenging to read, engaging with stream of consciousness—both as a reader and as a writer—offers profound psychological and spiritual benefits.
1. Breaking the Illusion of Isolation (Validation)
Human beings often feel deeply isolated by their own thoughts. We look at others and assume their minds are orderly, calm, and perfectly curated, while our own internal monologues can feel chaotic, fragmented, or obsessive.
The Spiritual Shift: Reading a stream-of-consciousness narrative acts as a mirror. When you see a character jumping from grief to a mundane observation about a passing car, it validates your own mental patterns. It whispers: You are not broken; this is simply what it feels like to be alive.
2. Encouraging Radical Mindfulness and Presence
The technique forces us to notice the absolute immediacy of the present moment. In a stream-of-consciousness narrative, a character simply walking down the street becomes an epic journey because of the sheer volume of sensory data, memories, and emotions triggered by the environment.
The Mental Shift: It trains the mind to appreciate the "now." It reminds us that every single moment we inhabit is rich, layered, and worthy of attention, turning ordinary daily routines into deeply textured experiences.
3. Catharsis through "Brain Dumping" (Writing as Therapy)
When applied as a personal practice—often referred to in psychological spaces as expressive writing or free writing—letting your thoughts flow onto paper without editing, pausing, or caring about punctuation is highly therapeutic.
The Emotional Shift: By bypassing your internal "editor" or critic, you allow suppressed emotions, raw fears, and unpolished truths to surface. It acts as an emotional pressure-release valve, untangling the knots of anxiety by simply giving the "stream" a place to go.
4. Cultivating Deep Empathy
Spiritually, stream of consciousness is an exercise in radical empathy. Traditional narrative tells you what a character feels; stream of consciousness lets you dwell inside their soul.
The Connectedness Shift: By experiencing the raw, unfiltered interior of a character who might be vastly different from us in age, gender, background, or era, we recognize the shared baseline of human vulnerability. It bridges the gap between the "self" and the "other."
Are you looking at this concept purely for your own reading and reflection, or are you hoping to experiment with writing in this style yourself?
Nothing better than a sail
rides the waves and sky
cutting through the water
most natural of rides.
As we went to
Martha's Vineyard
my dad, my wife
and me.
Mother passed some years before
dad living alone
we flew up from Virginia
was good to return home.
So many misadventures
and yet accomplished this
married a good woman
lovely, intelligent.
Off we went to Martha's place
my father looked at me
perhaps a little envious
or just feeling happy.
Taking photos of the sails
as they flew around
lighthouse in the distance
fabulous playground.
I knew that I could do it
raised the kids repaired
in my early fifties
problems solved
new era.
And now few decades later
life's journey full of bends
Dad has joined my mother
and I left the West End.
Time works very slowly
when watched
it comes about
silently observing
the one who calls it out.
It's those furry eyeballs
rimless eyewear too
frowning through creation
we've been dropped into.
Time the ghost of everything
here to bring us down
needs to be reminded
it can be lost
unbound.
A ship without a mooring
dancer needs a date
child playing forever
outdoors till very late.
"I lost track of time" she said
her eyes smiling so sweetly
as I said
"I missed you too"
"what time has it been lately?"
Crack of Bat ( read another poem? )
Full of fanciful desire
wander to the trees
dawn just now is happening
birds call out to me.
Don't care about material
harts run where they will
structure not important
rhyming just a drill
trying to find freedom
beyond the things we see
everyone is different
snowflakes eventually
but for now being a deer
heading to the woods
dog looks up noticing
back yard scents confused
his people are still sleeping
but out there what happens?
autumn brings it out in me
bright frost and strong desire
paths are chosen without thought
instinct blood repaired.
Evil never added up
way back as a teen
superficial reasons
no red-tailed demons
please!
But not connecting
many dots...
and so it came to pass
didn't do the Golden Rule
wandered off the path.
Did once try for a full week
to be a thoughtful person
extremely nice to everyone
not some deserved "this version".
And it made a difference
it really changed the route
but was left one person out
and did not love "myself".
Enjoying some relief frrom RLS with this YouTube video. Also am using this Spooky2 program with it...
nervous anxiety program:
Schumann (XTRA)
Electrical Sensitivity Reduce (XTRA)
Anxiety (XTRA)
Detox Mental Disorders (XTRA)
Essential Oil - Gentle Baby (XTRA)
Nerve Disorders and Neuropathy (XTRA)
The two together offer relief in just the first few hours. No medication. I have wrestled with this ailment for 25 years. I've never experienced anything like this. Spooky2 is an electromagnetic process that works thru contact and other methods as well. Look it up! I am using the cold laser wrist band. This is not medical advice. Consult a MD. Do your own research.